Hi I’m Raphael and this is a story about my life. It’s got ups and downs and stinky smells so, I hope you enjoy.
Once I was seven years old I remember going to Lego land and playing with the rc Lego cars while eating a massive chocolate fudge ice cream,it was the best trip ever(or so I thought ).?
When I was 9 to 10 I went to India for three and a half months. I saw the beautiful places of worship and started thinking,this place has it all.after a while I came back home and saw a horrible sight of a dead goat with blood coming out of its eyes and flies in its mouth.
Then once I was 11 years old I went on my real best trip to centre parcs and started biking everywhere ,it truly was my best trip ever especially the bacon spray cream chocolate fudge cookie dough fat cakes(fat pancakes).The best trip ever until tomorrow dun dun dun.
A few weeks ago my grandpa injured himself and had to go to hospital (my grandpa is 84),for he had had his heart stop for a few seconds and then carried on going,it was pretty Scarry when I heard the news.
Two weeks ago my friend fell out a tree and broke his arm. I went on the train to meet him,when I got there we played Star Wars battlefront together it was so much fun riding around on a speeder through the endor forest I have to say though his cast did stink a bit
on my phone I was playing trials extreme 4 on my phone when I found a glitch where if you hit a special post just right you will get sent to the finish line instantly. Then I went on my Xbox one and then I found a mother trick on need for speed rivals. What you do is you start a hot persuit and go backwards then use turbo and speed forwards at top speed.
A few days ago my friend Memphis took me to a trampoline place where you could jump from trampoline to trampoline,you could play slam dunk for a basketball jump and even football or dodgeball. Then afterwards we went home and watched kingsmen secret service.
my mum went to dubai and brought me back a massive present,on sunday (my mums birthday). It was two rc electric cars.They go 50 mph (not scale speed). I raced them on an of road rc (remote control) track it was epic.Gabriel (my brother) even had a drag race with me (i won).
for my birthday Donte (in this class) gave me the jd ultimate gift card so i used it to buy size 11 shoes they were epic.The money i collected after my birthday was a wopping £300 plus Tiago’s (in this school) amozon gift voucher.
For my mums birthday i went to the steam fair it was epic, I went on the swooping ships it was so scary but so thrilling.Then i played the duck fishing game where you have to hook the ducks in the pool.
Hope you enjoyed my autobiography, who knows what the future holds but I hope it’s good.
BYE!!

June 15, 2016 at 3:54 pm
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